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cradled hate pacified in wrong

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Cradled hate
Served on a plate
For all to enjoy it's delicasy

Cradled hate
Is more then we can take
It can turn into pure jealousy

Cradled waste
How we wrongly hold the filth we are so spaced
We fake others and can't tape

The things we hold so dear
The things we hold so near full of fear
Your minds will not be filled with mental rape

To hold so calously
To know so maliciously
To show so viciously
To go so malicely

We hold your tears
We rape them from your eyes
We know your fears
The cradled hate for us will be your demise

We know your life
We know who you love
We love you feeling strife
You can't push us or shove

We are your nightmare
Sickening come true
We are the things that violentely flare
But someone is here for you

With a heart of gold
And no strings ever attached
A friend that cares for you forever bold
With wits like yours that always match

With care that wraps itsself around you
They'll always be there when you fall
And the cradled hate you held so true
Will release itself and die when your friends do call

Be at peace with yourself
For no one can find you happiness
You have to embrace it off your mind's shelf
And take out its bliss full of grievances

I guess the cradled hate
Is dying forever and today
But you could always replay
The tapes your mind had recorded so grey

For in your mind
there is answers
some unknown
to the unthought questions
Some dare never to answer

For we fear the answers
Knowing what they may bring
But friendship in our ears will forever ring
I wrote this inspired by metalmistress and razor6nails works. I reflected on the darkness in my heart from pain I felt and turned it into this. Try to enjoy. The title means hate is held close to you and you pacify you are wrong but deny it somehow.
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itsrainingpoetry's avatar
Um....this is pretty good but all the stuff spelled wrong is terribly distracting...
delicaCy
itSelf
caLLously
violenTLY

also..."malicely" is not a word.

Try not to make your words fit into a rhyme scheme, they will flow more easily. You definitely have the right idea, just run everything through a spell checker first. It's hard to take a poem seriously if every other word is incorrectly spelled. Otherwise, pretty good job. Keep at it. :-)