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Cradled hate
Served on a plate
For all to enjoy it's delicasy
Cradled hate
Is more then we can take
It can turn into pure jealousy
Cradled waste
How we wrongly hold the filth we are so spaced
We fake others and can't tape
The things we hold so dear
The things we hold so near full of fear
Your minds will not be filled with mental rape
To hold so calously
To know so maliciously
To show so viciously
To go so malicely
We hold your tears
We rape them from your eyes
We know your fears
The cradled hate for us will be your demise
We know your life
We know who you love
We love you feeling strife
You can't push us or shove
We are your nightmare
Sickening come true
We are the things that violentely flare
But someone is here for you
With a heart of gold
And no strings ever attached
A friend that cares for you forever bold
With wits like yours that always match
With care that wraps itsself around you
They'll always be there when you fall
And the cradled hate you held so true
Will release itself and die when your friends do call
Be at peace with yourself
For no one can find you happiness
You have to embrace it off your mind's shelf
And take out its bliss full of grievances
I guess the cradled hate
Is dying forever and today
But you could always replay
The tapes your mind had recorded so grey
For in your mind
there is answers
some unknown
to the unthought questions
Some dare never to answer
For we fear the answers
Knowing what they may bring
But friendship in our ears will forever ring
Served on a plate
For all to enjoy it's delicasy
Cradled hate
Is more then we can take
It can turn into pure jealousy
Cradled waste
How we wrongly hold the filth we are so spaced
We fake others and can't tape
The things we hold so dear
The things we hold so near full of fear
Your minds will not be filled with mental rape
To hold so calously
To know so maliciously
To show so viciously
To go so malicely
We hold your tears
We rape them from your eyes
We know your fears
The cradled hate for us will be your demise
We know your life
We know who you love
We love you feeling strife
You can't push us or shove
We are your nightmare
Sickening come true
We are the things that violentely flare
But someone is here for you
With a heart of gold
And no strings ever attached
A friend that cares for you forever bold
With wits like yours that always match
With care that wraps itsself around you
They'll always be there when you fall
And the cradled hate you held so true
Will release itself and die when your friends do call
Be at peace with yourself
For no one can find you happiness
You have to embrace it off your mind's shelf
And take out its bliss full of grievances
I guess the cradled hate
Is dying forever and today
But you could always replay
The tapes your mind had recorded so grey
For in your mind
there is answers
some unknown
to the unthought questions
Some dare never to answer
For we fear the answers
Knowing what they may bring
But friendship in our ears will forever ring
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Um....this is pretty good but all the stuff spelled wrong is terribly distracting...
delicaCy
itSelf
caLLously
violenTLY
also..."malicely" is not a word.
Try not to make your words fit into a rhyme scheme, they will flow more easily. You definitely have the right idea, just run everything through a spell checker first. It's hard to take a poem seriously if every other word is incorrectly spelled. Otherwise, pretty good job. Keep at it.
delicaCy
itSelf
caLLously
violenTLY
also..."malicely" is not a word.
Try not to make your words fit into a rhyme scheme, they will flow more easily. You definitely have the right idea, just run everything through a spell checker first. It's hard to take a poem seriously if every other word is incorrectly spelled. Otherwise, pretty good job. Keep at it.