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Empty promises you told me
Every betrayal was more discgracing
Every bit of hate for me you had was hurtful
Every time you hurt me you made me feel more dull
Empty promises
A fake friend will never keep
Empty promises
I've been lied to too much and that should not be
Empty promises
The lies keep coming
And the pain keeps numbing
Every betrayal was more discgracing
Every bit of hate for me you had was hurtful
Every time you hurt me you made me feel more dull
Empty promises
A fake friend will never keep
Empty promises
I've been lied to too much and that should not be
Empty promises
The lies keep coming
And the pain keeps numbing
About promises. Interpret how you wish. there is no wrong answer to this poem
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very nice poem, just randomly dropping by sperading some comment joy 
so here it is 
i like da poem very much
my little part of constructive advice: could you try and um... possibly try and start the sentences with something other than empty promises...
i like...
so here it is i like da poem very much
my little part of constructive advice: could you try and um... possibly try and start the sentences with something other than empty promises...
i like...